My comments regarding the FPR Proposed Action are attached in the margins (electronic sticky notes). I suggest two significant improvements to the FPR proposed action: 1. First, reposition text to demonstrate true integration (suggestions note in attached). 2. Second, include integrated actions to apply vegetation management practices at a scale (large patches appropriate to a landscape) that progressively reduces the need and use for a historically expansive permanent road system. The intent is to localize immediate effects to biologic resources, improve operational effectiveness, and improve economic efficacy. Large/larger management patches and need for fewer permanent roads will render the biological, operational, social and economic benefits of economies-of-scale. An argument for larger patches, complete with references is attached.